Introductory paragraph for a brief essay about "What it takes to succeed in an Internet-based college course",


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Hi,
I did the ENGL 001 activity regarding introductory paragraph for a brief essay about “What it takes to succeed in an Internet-based college course”,
I described the internet briefly, teaching and learning is made accessible through the use of the internet and its use has implications for the individual, family, society and education in the sense that it becomes paramount to use the internet in a productive manner. To succeed, the student must be self-motivated, self-regulated and organized and so forth.
I need your feedback on the assignment.