Hi guys. I would love if you can leave some feedback concerning my outline below.
Using the prewriting and writing techniques you have just reviewed, develop an outline for Essay I, based on the Unit’s topic: “What does it take to succeed in an Internet-based college course?”
What does it take to succeed in an Internet-based college course?
One must have the necessary tools needed to take the class.
(a.) If you are taking an online course
you would need to be a computer an Internet.
(b.) A person would most likely not
pass the course due to lack of material.
One must be willing to spend time on the course.
(a.) If you are always busy you won't have time for assignments. (b.) Time means that you care.
Must be able to commit.
(a.) Stick with course even when it gets hard. If you don't complete it, you most definitely won't Succeed in it .
You have to want to succeed.
(a.) Spending time and doing nothing won't help. You have to want to pass.